The maps below show the malvern nature school campus in 1999 and development plans for 2029
The maps depict how the
campus
of a nature school
looked in 1999 and how it will look in 2029.
Overall
, the main differences are the expansion of the school
buildings and the minimisation of the sports field as well as
the addition of a car park.
In 1999, there were two
school
buildings which were separated by a path. In 2029, the two
school
buildings will be joined together and an additional third building will be added. This
new structure will be joined to the original two
by a path. In 1999, there was only one car park which was located in the northwest of the campus
. However
, in 2029 there will be another parking lot added to the east of school
building three. The sports field in the north will be removed to make way for the third Add an article
the school
school
building and will be replaced by a smaller one in the east of the campus
. Also
, the road in the west will be extended to cross across the campus
, run south of school
building Add an article
the school
two
and join the new car park in the northeastSubmitted by amcubrias on
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