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The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
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The given bar chart illustrates the
passangers
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passenger
 number of the three different airports
of
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in
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 New York City between 1995 to 2000. There are three different
airport
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airports
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 included
to
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in
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the chart
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chart
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charts
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such
 as John F. Kennedy,
LaGuardia
, and Newark.
Overall
, the
airport
 of
LaGuardia
 was the most visited
airport
 by
passangers
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passengers
 during the five
years
 of period.
Moreover
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 the
years
of
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apply
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1998 and 1999 show
similar
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a similar
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pattern
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 to each
others
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other
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. First and foremost,
LaGuardia
airport
was
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peaked
68
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at 68
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% of visitors
at
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in
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 2000 which
one
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is
the
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of the
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 most visited
airport
 during 5
years
of
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apply
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period. In 1995, the
airport
 of Newark visited by 15% of travellers which was slightly increased to 25% and 38% following
years
. From 1998 to 2000, the
airport
 of Newark protected its steady position as 42% of travellers a year among airports. The
airport
 of John F. Kennedy gradually increased between 1995 to 1997 and peaked
48
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at 48
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% in 1997.
Besides
 the
airport
 of
LaGuardia
, the
airport
 of John F. Kennedy didn't maintain
rising
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a rising
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 period and plunged until 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words airport, laguardia, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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