Some people think that the government should use extra money to fund programs to improve the environment. Others think that it is better for the government to spend money to support artistic programs. Which option do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the increasing abundance of material life, can improve our surroundings which is conducive to our health,
people
's demand for a better spiritual is growing. As a result
, some people
believe the official should invest more in the artistic field while
others consider those environmental perservation
Correct your spelling
preservation
programs
need more support. I agree with the latter viewpoint
because investing more in Replace the word
view
environment related
projects can benefit more individuals than funding artistic projects and they are beneficial for sustainable Add a hyphen
environment-related
development
. I will illustrate some examples to prove my view this
essay.
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in this
To begin
with, environmental quality is closely linked with everyone's life, it can seriously affect our healthy
and life span. Replace the word
health
For instance
, when the
time goes back to 2008, the Correct article usage
apply
air
condition of Beijing was terrible, with a high concentration of PM2.5 in the air
, according to
a study, there were millions of people
suffered
from respiratory diseases Change the form of the verb
suffering
due to
the
Correct article usage
apply
air
pollution, the reason about
it was Change preposition
apply
people
in northern China using thermal power for heating in winter unrestrictly
, which emitted tons of ashy into Correct your spelling
unrestrictedly
unrestricted
air
. Afterwards, it was valued by the government, and officials decided to push some Add an article
the air
environmantal
Correct your spelling
environmental
programs
, nowadays, people
in Beijing breathe clean air
and live healthier than before. Sadly, investing in art cannot improve people
's health in this
regard.
On the other hand
, improving environment
is able to meet the needs of the present without compromising the ability of future generations, Correct article usage
the environment
this
concept also known
as sustainable Add the auxiliary verb
is also known
development
. For example
, as the extensive forestation, soil desertification accompanies with
water resource Change preposition
by
losing
has posed a threat to our descendants. Replace the word
loss
Thus
, increase
support for Wrong verb form
increasing
environmental
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the environmental
program
has Fix the agreement mistake
programs
positive
impact on sustainable Add an article
a positive
development
, while
fund
art Replace the word
funding
programs
does
not have Change the verb form
do
this
Correct determiner usage
these
advantages
.
In conclusion, administrations Fix the agreement mistake
advantage
pour
more funds to Wrong verb form
pouring
environmant
related Correct your spelling
environmental
programs
Correct pronoun usage
that
moreover
, it takes advantages
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advantage
to
sustainable Change preposition
of
development
. These two reasons can not be replaced by art
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an art
project
, and Fix the agreement mistake
projects
this
is why I prefer government investment in environmental related
Add a hyphen
environmental-related
programs
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