Countries are becoming mor and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? It is true that the globalization has made the world a global village and the countries are lot more similar than ever before.

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The possibility of accessing a market

that is

more and more global is contributing to uniform the worldwide community.

This

thing has positive and negative aspects. The market's globalization is making it easier to buy every kind of product, e.g. foods,

clothes

, technologies, etc. all around the world. All of

this

is making people more alike all over the world. In every city and

nation

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it is possible to meet people wearing the same

clothes

, who eat the same foods and who use the same technology. The companies want to reach economies of scale with the reduction of production costs

that is

a result of making and selling goods in large quantities,

for example

, the ability to buy large amounts of materials at reduced prices or to sell large quantities of the same products in many countries in the world. It is possible to reach these goals through advertising on TV, on the Internet and on paper which can create a unique global market with increasingly equal consumers.

On the other hand

, all of these things are causing us to lose

the

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traditional habits.

Above all

, people are forgetting their own origins, the traditional dishes and

clothes

. Western countries seem to be

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unique

nation

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without particular differences. Only the third-world's nations seem to be related to the traditions. In fact, they wear traditional

clothes

and they eat the ancient dishes passed down from generation to generation. Unfortunately, the new generations look at the richest nations as an example and they would like to have the same lifestyle. In conclusion, in my opinion, if there are many positive things in globalization, it is making us leave our old traditions and it is not a good thing.

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Countries are becoming mor and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? It is true that the globalization has made the world a global village and the countries are lot more similar than ever before.

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