The chart below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eatem too much. Sumarise the information by searching and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eatem too much.

Sumarise the information by searching and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the information of four kinds of meal which contain
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of three nutrients;
sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar, that can make unhealthy for humans when consume a lot.
Overall
, it can be seen that dinner has the biggest
proportion
of
sodium
and saturated fat
while
breakfast
has the smallest figure of all three nutrients. Lunch is the second
percentage
of both
sodium
and saturated fat where as a snack has the biggest figure for added sugar
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sodium
and saturated fat, both have
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proportion
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of all kinds of foods.
Breakfast
has the smallest figure of
sodium
and saturated fat at 14% and 16%,
while
snacks have the equally smallest
proportion
of
sodium
as
breakfast
meal at 14% and are 21% in saturated fat. Dinner and Lunch have the first and second-rank
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of
sodium
and saturated fat at 43% and 29% of
sodium
and 37% and 26% of saturated fat. Turning to the added sugar information, the biggest
proportion
is snacks at 42%, followed by dinner and lunch at 23% and 19% respectively
while
the smallest
percentage
of these nutrients is
breakfast
at 16%
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