The chart below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eatem too much. Sumarise the information by searching and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the information of four kinds of meal which contain
percentage
of three nutrients; Add an article
a percentage
the percentage
sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar, that can make unhealthy for humans when consume a lot.
Overall
, it can be seen that dinner has the biggest proportion
of sodium
and saturated fat while
breakfast
has the smallest figure of all three nutrients. Lunch is the second percentage
of both sodium
and saturated fat where as a snack has the biggest figure for added sugar nutrient
.
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Breakfast
has the smallest figure of sodium
and saturated fat at 14% and 16%, while
snacks have the equally smallest proportion
of sodium
as breakfast
meal at 14% and are 21% in saturated fat. Dinner and Lunch have the first and second-rank percentage
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percentages
sodium
and saturated fat at 43% and 29% of sodium
and 37% and 26% of saturated fat.
Turning to the added sugar information, the biggest proportion
is snacks at 42%, followed by dinner and lunch at 23% and 19% respectively while
the smallest percentage
of these nutrients is breakfast
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