How social media affects the daily lives? what do you extent agree or disagree?
There is growing sentiment today related to social
media
and its impacts on people
's life
. In modern life
today, social media
brings many advantages for both individuals and business companies. In this
essay, I will discuss its benefits and give some certain examples.
To begin
with individual benefits, social media
can be seen as a helpful platform where people
can easily communicate and connect with others. People
today tend to have some conversations at home through social media
apps such
as Facebook Messenger, WhatsApp, Discord, Skype, etc, especially young people
. Technology brings people
closer, people
can easily talk with their friends, and their family without worrying about distance or other elements. For example
, I am studying abroad in Finland and my home country is Vietnam, it is a really long distance and if go back to the past, we only connect with others through phone calls, its fee is really high and the international network is not so good, from that, it brings many disadvantages for two sides. Thanks to the development of technology, I can talk with them really easily whenever I want, through the chatting app we can talk without paying any fee and I can see my parent clearly via video call.
On the other hand
, social media
plays an important role for business companies in the marketing field. Following the current trend, marketing on social media
can be seen as the most efficient way to advertise a company's products
or services. People
spend a lot of time on social media
to watch entertainment shows or find some interesting things for their life
. Attraction from amazing advertisements or some products
that they are interested in, finding researching tools will make them click on the company's link and it may promote the consumption of other products
being advertised. For example
, when someone wants to find a hairclip, an interesting hairclip advertisement will bring them to an accessories store, and they tend to watch more about other products
and buy more. It will increase the number of purchases and consumption.
In conclusion, social media
brings many benefits for both personnel and companies. If we can develop more social media
apps, it will help people
's life
become more convenient and easier.Submitted by khanhlinh151123 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite