The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

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The maps illustrate the industrial area which is situated in the

town

of Norbiton and how it will look in future after some changes.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that a number of major modifications are going to be in the

town

of Norbiton. These include

developed

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developing

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a playground, school, shops and other

supportive

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support

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facilities. At present, a roundabout is situated in the middle of

this

area which is connected to the east and south

side

roads. The factories are to be placed beside the roundabout which is on the west

side

and the east

side

has some factories too. The farmland is located on the north

side

where

river

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the river

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is crossing across the farmland.

However

, the west

side

has a

town

. In future, the roundabout will be expanded and it will be connected to the north

side

, east

side

, south

side

and

north-west

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northwest

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side

roads. Even the south

side

road will be connected to another roundabout which will be smaller than the previous middle one.

Playground

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A playground

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, school, medical centre and three houses are

plans

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planned

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to construct on the east

side

road in future. The

south-west

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southwest

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side

will have shops beside the roundabout. There are to be planned that a big house will be built near the farmland which will be replaced on the north-east

side

. The

north-west

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northwest

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side

road will have three houses which will be beside the river.

On the other hand

, the river and

town

will remain unchanged.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is increase of noise in our daily lives nowadays. Why is this a problem? What can be done to reduce it?

It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Some people believe that universities are producing more graduates than needed, and that less emphasis should be placed on university education. Others are of a different opinion. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

Some people think that it is better for a country’s economy for people to spend money while others believe that it would be better for people to save money. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.