You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to ask you about the advertisement for a training

course

. Recently, when I was walking alone in the park, I happened to see an advertisement about the usefulness of training courses.

Firstly

, I see that

this

one-month

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a one-month

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training

course

with additional meetings with famous business-mans who have a lot of experience in the

course

. In

this

, I can find a lot of benefits,

such

as information about ‘How to have a good marketing strategy?’.

Moreover

, they offer amazing foreign language courses.

Also

, there are a lot of activities and games to help people be more flexible and responsive at

work

That is

the reason why I really want to enjoy

this

project. It's so grateful if you can let me know more about

this

project

then

I will buy

this

for a month

course

for the team because it should help me to improve my skills and ability to

work

better and make decisions faster. Because I am a staff in an international company

that is

why I always want to

work

with a team abroad. So will be great if we can

work

together. If you accept our cooperation, please contact me as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Bim

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secondly
thirdly
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moreover
also
for example
for instance
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although
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