You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have some problems and can’t stay for the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out whether a refund is possible if you leave early

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Stephen Gore, writing to inquire some details about the tennis
course
that you conduct. I would specifically like to know your refund policy for people who cannot complete the whole
course
. I have recently noticed your advertisement in a daily newspaper and as a passionate learner of
this
sport, I would like to get enrolled in
this
three-month-long program. As the
course
is intended for intermediate players of tennis, it would be a good fit for me.
However
, there are some issues that I would like to resolve before getting enrolled in
this
course
.
First,
the timing of the
course
.
According to
the advertisement, it is from 4:00 to 6:00 in the evening.
However
, I cannot join it before 5:30 pm. Is there any option to adjust the timing or date? I guess that would be necessary for learners who have full-time jobs.
Besides
, I will probably travel to Sydney, Australia during my
course
schedule and would stay there for almost two months. Considering
this
, can I get a refund in case I do not complete the whole
course
? What is the refund policy?
Finally
, I would request you to email the document checklists to join the
course
. Thank you in advance. A prompt response would be highly appreciated. Yours faithfully, Stephen Gore
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