In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose art subjects (example literature), and boys tend to choose science subjects (example physics). Why do you think is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree?

There is a phenomenon now that art courses seem to attract girls more
while
boys prefer to apply for science majors. I disagree with
this
kind of social atmosphere and I consider it stems from a biased education and it needs to be changed. I will discuss my viewpoints in the following essay. For a long time, some parents have tended to cultivate their offsprings based on their children's gender, because a conventional saying of girls are good at literature and boys are good at martial art prevail among people,
as a result
, a girl who aspires to be an engineer can feel strange.
For instance
, those people who come from a conservative family are more likely to consider that females would better take care of the family
while
males should accept the challenges of working outside.
This
makes an inherent mind which causes different genders to have different preferences in subject selection. There is no doubt that
this
outdated mindset should be changed in
this
rapidly developing world of technology,
otherwise
, it will go against the progress of the world.
For example
, a study by MIT found that disruptive technology AI can not recognize female programmers because there are too few datasets related to women.
Therefore
, we need to encourage students to dismiss the concept of sex difference and choose courses in a more comprehensive way.
For
this
reason, I strongly disagree with
this
phenomenon. In conclusion, the situation of gender imbalance in some subjects is caused by a long-time-formed sex difference concept,
however
,
this
tendency is not in line with the development of modern society so I strongly disagree with
this
tendency.
Submitted by 15280151 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

What to do next:
Look at other essays: