‘Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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In older times, children used to show immense

respect

to their teachers and parents. The pupils were not allowed to talk and abide by all decisions made by them.

This

behaviour shows the high value given by their parents.

However

, it is debatable that these days, children don't follow

this

anymore and

hence

, they don't show

respect

to their parents.

To begin

with, I would like to understand what is '

respect

' for anyone. It is talking properly, listening to them all the time or never arguing with them. I would

also

like to mention that

this

notion of

respect

was prevalent with older generations.

For example

, my mother used to narrate that she always has to listen to her father irrespective of the fact that she believes in it or not. As per her,

this

is her

respect

towards her father.

However

this

perception stands as a distorted perception among

this

generation.

Respect

is something

that is

demanded not only by elders but, by younger ones as well. The new notion of '

Respect

' in today's era is not just abiding by what elders say,

instead

, you can give your viewpoint and

hence

agree to disagree.

For instance

, I am open to giving my opinion about what I feel when I talk to my father. I have an environment where I can give my opinion and

hence

can take my own decision.

This

is not considered as any act of disrespect. Yet,

this

is considered as a negative impact on the community as the people are stuck with the older perception of

respect

. Considering everything, our community should develop in

such

a way that everyone gets a chance to put their opinion in a respectful tone irrespective of their age.

This

will help to build a better nation where children will automatically learn to give

respect

when they receive

respect

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