You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are due to give a presentation at work at the end of this week, but you are unwell and would like to postpone the presentation. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter, Describe the presentation Explain why you cannot deliver the presentation on the scheduled day Request a different date for your presentation You do NOT need to write any addresses. write at least 150 words Begin your letter as follows: Dear...,

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Dear Mr Adam, I am writing

this

letter to request to reschedule my presentation

due to

my health condition.

firstly

, I am deeply apologizing for the inconvenience and I suppose to present the new product range which we are going to launch next month in our department stores.I do understand that

this

is a very important assignment that you handed over to me. I am really sorry again that I may not able to do my duties as expected

Due to

a serious health condition I am going through .My doctor strongly advised me to take bed rest at least for 3 days to recover from my sickness.

Therefore

, I would like to request a new date within next week to perform my presentation. And

also

I would be greatly appreciated it if you cloud inform all the suppliers to attend next week's presentation and I will make sure that I will be prepared with all the aspects. Thank you for your understanding and kind cooperation . Yours faithfully Mike Thomas

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical resource: 9.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

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