Some people believe that Art gives our lives meaning and purpose. Others believe that it is merely a distraction from real life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Art

is one of the skills that bring benefits and drawbacks, which depends on how the community use it in their path in

life

. Some groups argue that arts give meaning and

value

to their personal

life

,

while

the others group think that it is merely a distraction from their

life

. In

this

essay, I side with those who believe that

art

brings more benefits to our

life

rather than disadvantages.

To begin

with,

art

considers a beneficial skill for our

life

.

It is clear that

many schools now have

art

in

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their agenda.

For example

, the students learn to draw a picture, sing a song, and play instruments.

Moreover

, it brings plenty of advantages for children’s brain development,

such

as they can learn how to feel the atmosphere, how to express their emotion through the music and

also

in a

further

step they can choose

art

as their goal in

life

.

For instance

, my friends choose the

art

program

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university because they are keen on it and find it as their soul, which means they already get their purpose in

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art

.

On the other hand

, people

also

think that

art

is one of the distractions in

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life

.

However

,

the

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art

gives

an

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entertainment to us and

also

defines our

value

as

a

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human

being

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beings

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. The arts

is

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not only define

as

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our

value

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values

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but beyond that, it

is

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also

define our characteristics.

In particular

, the

song writer

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determines their genre and

it

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also

define

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their characteristics.

To conclude

,

art

brings many advantages in our real

life

,

such

to express our emotions, learning to feel our surroundings deeply and

last

but not least is one of the ways to develop our child’s right brain.

Thus

, it is my view that

art

gives us

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entertainment, but beyond

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it defines our

value

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values

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and characteristics.