Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In our thriving economic democracy, a multitude of citizens are scared of going out of their homes for the reason of becoming victims of

crime

and many countries today are grappling with the best ways to curb rising

crime

rates.

Although

some

people

think that there is little that can be done to reduce the levels of

crime

, I believe there are several rationales to tackle

this

serious issue. On the one hand,

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that some solutions were applied,

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proportion of

crime

rate did not change.

To begin

with, the

government

does not provide enough

police

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dedicated to

ensure

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the security of the inhabitant.

For example

, in India, a third of

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involved in the actual work of a

police

officer,

while

the rest of the

police

do security services for politicians and senior officials.

Consequently

, there is a situation of theft of property and vehicles in public places on the street.

Moreover

, the achievements from economic growth and development are not distributed fairly and equally to everyone in society.

As a result

, it is obvious that the

crime

rate is

increasingly

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, especially

juvenile

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among juvenile

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delinquent

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delinquents

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when there are frequent robberies, murders and robberies.

However

, from my point of view, there are solutions that will ensure

people

feel safer outside their homes.

Firstly

, the

government

needs to increase

more

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police

patrols on the streets to prevent the rate of criminal

crime

. To be more specific, if criminals or those with malicious

intents

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witness

police

force patrolling in public places days and nights, they are more likely to be deterred from committing crimes

due to

the fear of immediate

police

arrest.

As a result

, rates of crimes would drop significantly.

Secondly

, the

government

should include capital punishment in the law system as it will create

a

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fear among

the

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criminals and

also

prevent crimes.

For instance

, President Donald Trump has imposed the death penalty

for

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all violent criminals.

Besides

, the

government

should create more job opportunities for the poor

people

, because it will narrow the gap between the rich and the poor not completely but is a solution to reduce levels of

crime

. In conclusion,

although

there will be many

behaviors

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that make

people

afraid to leave their

home

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homes

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, I believe that the

government

will take strict measures and laws against those who break the law.