You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The histogram, illustrates, during the year 2009, the courses by men and women, at an adult education centre, during the year 2009. From an
overall
perspective, it's evident that the activities taken into consideration in
this
task are 4, or rather Drama, Painting, Sculpture, and Language.
In addition
, the graph depicts a range of ages between 20 to 50 or over.
To begin
with, the first activity, which is drama, during the year 2009, shows a high proportion presence of ladies, with a number of 20 participants; whilst in the gent's case the result for their participation is less than 10.  Following the next two events, about painting and language, the percentage of females still over the men.
On the other hand
, the course of sculpture is the only case in which men's presence is higher respected than women's. Walst is
moreover
significant to consider the very wide of ages present in the scatter diagram.
For instance
, the highest fraction of 45% is for people over 50,
while
the lowest of 5%, is for the aged under 20.
To sum up
, what has already been stated, it's important to declare that the activities during 2009, are more frequented by the presence of women, over 50 years old.
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