In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This has adverse effects on families, individuals and the society. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

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Nowadays,more

number of

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people

love to eat fast

food

such

burger

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burgers

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, pizza and momo which are popular all over the world. The vast majority of individuals are not eating their own traditional dishes but rather they prefer to eat International foods and

this

cuisine has effected positively on many families,

people

and even society. In my opinion, I totally agree because

people

are busy with their work and

as well as

people

are influenced to eat fast

food

Firstly

, many

people

and families are consuming fast

food

due to

the influence of watching different advertisements which are related to fast

food

through Tv, the Internet and newspaper.

For example

, If

people

are free they will outside and will see an advertisement in different cafes, and restaurants that are related to international

food

such

as pizza, burgers, chicken chilly, and many others

food

. From

this

, if a person is a

food

lover

then

they can easily get influenced.

Therefore

, pupils will forget about their traditional cultural

food

and prefer to eat fast

food

Secondly

, the consumption of fast

food

is increasing in many parts of the country because

people

are busy at their work. To recite an example, when I went to Thailand I saw lots of

people

consuming fast

food

because it is prepared within approximately five minutes and they are returning back to their work. If

people

make

food

by themselves

then

it will take more time to cook.

Hence

such

foods have made

people

's life easier in comparison to the past and make them comfortable in fulfilling their duty.

To conclude

, in my point of view, fast

food

is delicious and

also

saves us time and we can do our tasks.

Therefore

, it has a positive effect on families

as well as

society.

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