Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic. Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

The advancement in medical science has made it possible to treat diseases with developed vaccines, that had remained unaddressed for a long time and took many precious

lives

.

However

, in my point of view,

parents

should be educated and should be held responsible to get their

children

the required vaccines when and if required. Since technology has been transformed dramatically, so is the medical field.

However

, once there was a plethora of childhood diseases that were supposed to be non-treatable. The result was the loss of many precious human

lives

particularly the

children

. A number of diseases can now be dealt

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access to vaccines aimed at countering them. Taking the example of polio,

this

has been almost diminished from the world except for least-developed countries and ultimately saved the

lives

of millions, who were at risk of disability that would have run throughout their

lives

. Meanwhile, it’s the parent duty to get their

children

vaccinated as soon as possible or as prescribed by the government authorities, since

parents

are at the receiving end

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any physical disability is developed in their

children

.

Nevertheless

, there are

also

many social impacts on

children

due to

disability. The governments can facilitate the

parents

by educating them through regular visits of health workers and letting them know about the importance of vaccination.

In addition

, the government must introduce a policy of some incentives for

parents

to encourage them to vaccinate their

children

. If it is only left

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the

parents

to decide themselves it will be colossal damage to the whole of society. With the exception of a few, the majority will not do vaccination citing a number of reasons, jobs,

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, religious factors, and, many more. In conclusion, multi-layered, sustainable, and collective efforts are required from all walks of life especially

parents

to vaccinate the future generation timely and make them progressive, members of society.