The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams show how
cement
and concrete are produced. Overall
,
there are five stages in the production of cement
, while
the procedure
for producing concrete from cement
and a few other simple
ingredients involves
a single stage.
Change the verb form
involve
Cement
production begins when the initial raw materials, namely
limestone and clay, are crushed using two rotating drums to make a
fine powder which is then
mixed in a cylindrical mixer. The next stage
involves a tube-like rotating heater with a blowtorch mounted at its
bottom opening. The mixed powder is fed from the top and
simultaneously heated and blended, after which it is transferred to a
grinder using a conveyor belt. There, it is milled to yield the final
cement
product which is eventually packed in bags.
This
cement
is used as raw material in the production of concrete in a
second process. An initial mixture comprising 15% cement
, 10% water,
one-quarter sand
and half Change preposition
of sand
gravel
Change preposition
of gravel
is
fed into a rotating concrete mixer
where they are stirred until the concrete mix is ready for construction
purposes.Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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