You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangements and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:- 1. describe your situation 2. explain your problems and why it is difficult to work 3. say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. By the way, my name is Joziba Maxmasoliyeva who is your college student.I am writing

this

letter to express my position about your accommodation.

That is

to say,

live in an apartment at

this

college with another student.

However

, there are a lot of problems with my new accommodation.

For instance

, after my study ,

can not relax properly because of the inconvenience of my new apartment. There is only one room to sleep us.

For

this

reason,

can not yet ready for my college . She goes to bed very early after dinner .

Then

have to sleep.

This

is the reason,

can not able to work with darkness. I would prefer to live alone in one room . Now

am asking you to change my accommodation to another one. It would be good if it is on the tenth floor. I hope you will resolve the matter to our satisfaction. If you need any other details, please feel free to write to me. I would certainly be interested in hearing from you soon as possible. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Maxmasoliyeva Joziba

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