The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010
The bar chart provides information about the number of teachers in the UK, teaching various areas of education in the year 2010. The comparison is between male and female educational providers.
Overall
, in nursery/preschool & primary school, women show significant numbers inside the classroom,
while
, both sexes share almost the same figures in secondary, college and private training institutes.
Whereas
more men teach in universities than women.
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in the UK about 90% of teachers in the nursery or preschool and primary class are women which is the highest,
whereas
just under 20% of their men counterparts in that same area, which is the lowest recorded in that year.
On the other hand
, a slight difference in figures can be observed between the sexes in the highs-school and private institutions at just below and above 40%,respectively.
While
they are equal inside the college classroom. Wherein in university an estimated 70% are male teachers, and half of the ratio are females.
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