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Nowadays anima experiments are widely used to develop new medicines to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animal to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Most
people
 consider that technological innovations affect the community badly, for ,instance smartphones and new types of phones are making lots of
people
 antisocial.
However
,
while
 I believe that
such
 phones are making comfortable our
lives
, I agree that they have had a damaging influence on our social
lives
. My essay will illustrate that First of all, most
people
 believe that cell phones are making
people
 objectionable
therefore
 they claim that the audience spends west of
time
 on the phone
moreover
 I
also
 spend much free
time
 on the phone. To my mind, many
people
 prefer to make new
friends
 on the same online programs
in addition
 to making
friends
 only on the phone can cause many social issues.
In particular
, many
people
 suffer from social anxiety since they only use the telephone for communicating with their
friends
, thereby, they cannot make new relationships easily face-to-face.
Secondly
, to my way of thinking, if we compare the former and nowadays, we will see that
people
's social
lives
 decrease
therefore
 they gradually lose connection. A lot of
people
 are addicted forefront
thus
 they do not take the
time
 to meet their best
friends
.
For example
, many students went to the library after the lessons in the 20 century and they met
friends
, made new connections and
also
 spent
time
 with colleagues
while
 nowadays most students use just online which is why they cannot make new bonds. In conclusion, it seems to me that many
people
 have addicted to automation
therefore
, of course, I know mobile telephones and new technologies make our
lives
 easier
nevertheless
 I think that we should spend more
time
 with
friends
 in private than using chat applications.
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