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The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010
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As the chart displays information about male and female
teachers
 in six types of educational institutions in the UK in 2010. It shows what percentage of
teachers
 were male and what percentage were female.
Overall
, it can be seen from the chart that
women
 were more predominated in the maternal role of teaching young children.
However
, men were outstanding in teaching at
the
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 higher level of education. the majority of
women
 were prominent in
school
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schools
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 for children. The
quantity
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 of female
teachers
 in nursery
school
 was approximately 95 per
cent
. The situation was
similarly
 one-sided in primary
school
, where over 90 per
cent
 of
teachers
 were
women
.
Additionally
, in secondary
school
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 the number of
women
was
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slightly outweighed
than
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 men. The data represented the proportion of female
teachers
 in secondary
school
 to be roughly 55 per
cent
. Men and
Women
 were equally represented in teaching college, which was 50 per
cent
.
Lastly
, males held a larger share in teaching
higher level
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 institutions.
This
 was particularly true for universities, where twice as many males were teaching staff than females.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words teachers, women, school, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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