Despite the increased access to education a significant number of people cannot read or write. What are the disadvantages and what action should the government take

Nowadays, people have more

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to access different

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of source information to gain

further

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, there is a fact that plenty of citizens

are still not have

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ability

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the ability

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of reading or

writing

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.

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essay I will discuss the disadvantages of increased access to education. On the one hand,

unable

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being unable

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to read or write is a barrier

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daily life. citizens have many hurdles in their life if they are illiterate. They can not protect themselves when

person

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is facing

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a problem

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problem

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.

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unable to read the instructions of the machine. It causes

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serious

complication

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and gets hurt.

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, a staff who has difficulty

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reading the warning and hazard signs of a product.

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, he could not understand the instruction

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the product. He got

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hurt when he was using the machine.

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, it causes

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trouble

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anytime

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. Government should provide a product learning class to the staff before they use it. It ensures the staff understand how to use

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have a real demonstration.

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, easily deceived by other to take

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advantage especially

illiterate

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the illiterate

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. Based on

this

feature, the bad guy may provide some unclear documents to them and signs

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. It is a trap for them. They can not fight for it because of the defect.

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, Tim signed the contract which was an unfair contract. He could not fight for his profits. It might have a terrible influence on his later

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including

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into a crime.

Therefore

, it increases the risk of

illiterate

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being illiterate

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to a crime. Government should provide more consultation

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for them. It provides a chance for them to ask and learn the technique of

sign

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a contract. In conclusion,

illiterate

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the illiterate

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has a lot of

problem

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when they can not know the meaning of words. Government should give more afford to illiterates

improve

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their life.