Too much money is spent in maintaining and repairing old buildings, some people think they should be knocked down and give way to modem building. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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amount of money goes to

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and repair

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old buildings. That others would argue that

instead

of fixing it should be demolished and replaced with

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building. I partially agree, as I believe that it's impractical to keep old

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as

this

is expensive and needs a lot of

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.

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giving way to new infrastructure will keep people safe,

as well as

will boost the community. On

one

hand,

although

old buildings are considered part of

history

in

one

's place

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to keep it good as it was, it needs delicate maintenance and repair which could be costly.

Therefore

, if it is not that significant it would be practical to tear it down and replace

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new

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structure as

this

will not only give

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image of the community,albeit it can save more money that could be used for other purposes.

In addition

, keeping old building

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structure

is unsafe for

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. In Jordan,

for instance

, decades ago the building collapsed during the wedding reception as it was not able to withstand the

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weight

of the people in the reception hall.

On the other hand

, I believe that there are things to consider in before knocking down an old building,

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history

and

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in

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society. Since building structure

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an important role in identifying

one

's culture.

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in Ilocos

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, their houses and street building are built during the

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colonial, breaking it down would mean removing a part of

one

's culture,

history

, and economy, as

this

also

became

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visit

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place as it

attract

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many

tourist

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both local and abroad. In conclusion, I would argue that to keep an old building is expensive and impractical,

however

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some points

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to consider since some old

building

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buildings

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have

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had a significant share of our

history

that often attracts

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around the globe that help boost

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socio-economic.

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I acknowledge the risk to the people as it is not safe to stay in old buildings since physical

structure

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are weaken

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by

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time.