You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had Jett some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say where you think you Jett the papers • explain why they are so important • tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Dear Sir, My name is Amandeep Singh and I am writing

this

letter to bring to your notice that I have left some of my important documents in your hotel's room. If I remember correctly, I stayed at your hotel in room 406 from the 10th to the 17th of May. My documents are in the red file and should be inside the black locker placed in the almirah of the room. In these files, there are some important papers regarding my employment offer. I request you keep

this

file in person with you unless and until these are personally handed over to me.

Furthermore

, If these agreements get into any wrongful hands,

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may attract fines and imprisonment.

Therefore

, I request you to be extra precautions

while

handling it. If you need any

further

information, kindly feel free to mail or contact me at my given email address and phone number. I would be happy to assist you in case you require any

further

information. Thanking you in anticipation. Yours sincerely, Amandeep Singh.

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