The maps below show the layouts of nature Museum between 2010 and 2013.

The maps below show the layouts of nature Museum between 2010 and 2013.
The two maps compared a natural history museum before and after some adjustments to the layout between 2010 and 2013.
, it can be seen that
place had experienced some major alternations, including the addition, replacement, and rearrangement of many of the amenities. It can be clearly observed that the garden, which is situated on the right-hand side of the region, was converted into a complex place with more amenities, including a mammals' exhibition, a coffee shop, a shop, and a human history display. At deeper inspection,
the Ocean Hall and Dinosaur presentation remained unchanged, the mammals' demonstration and the
sector had witnessed some adjustments. Regarding the former, it was dedicated to the Ice Age exhibition, which accounted for the majority of the area, and the insect room occupied a small space.
the ticket desk and the entrance experienced no change over the given period, there was an additional lobby in the middle of
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