You are preparing an event in the countryside. Write a letter to your friend and ask for help with the arrangements. What the event is. Why the event is being held? What arrangements have already been made? How your friend can help?

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Dear Susan, How are you? I hope you're doing well. I'm glad to inform you that I'd be organizing an educational event for the underprivileged people in our nearby village. Since my childhood, I wanted to spread education awareness among the villagers and now getting big support from the local council.

Firstly

, as villagers lack knowledge and resources, it is our responsibility to educate them so that they can live a good life in future. Because I come from the same background, I'd

also

to help these people and other people helped me to learn and grow.

Thus

, I'd like to make a difference in other's life.

Furthermore

, I've arranged support from the local NGO which will ensure supplies of necessary materials

such

as stationary, boards and other materials.

Further

, I'd be needing some volunteers so that they can convince them that studies can change the future of their child and I know you are best at persuading the public. Needless to say, I am looking forward to your support. Regards, Vikas

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You are preparing an event in the countryside. Write a letter to your friend and ask for help with the arrangements. What the event is. Why the event is being held? What arrangements have already been made? How your friend can help?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform?

some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forests amounts to death of the world we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole Do you agree or disagree