Science is very important in the 21st century. How do you think it could be made more appealing to young people?

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Nowadays, young people have took more attention to technology than

science

However

science

is really relevant for all, actually in the 21st century.

Hence

, scholars around the

world

such

as teachers, researchers, and others are concerned about

this

new generation. I have an opinion about it and I`m going to discuss it

further

this

essay. To commence, we are living in an interconnected

world

through

technologies

and the internet, so everything has become easiest after new devices came to real life, for example of Ipads, smartphones, and so. To support

this

statement, research made by

Science

and Technology magazine brings up some curious data about the population in Brazil. Curiously, each Brazilian has at least two smartphones, no matter if they are rich or poor, young or old. In my mind, everyone should have contact with

technologies

to develop the necessary skills and keep updated,

on the other hand

, facilities

such

technologies

have to be used with

science

abilities.

Moreover

, the

world

was hit by artificial intelligence, and many people have been in craze for

this

facility,

otherwise

this

is a controversial development made by humans.

For instance

, an interview which meets influences businessmen from all over the

world

provided important information about

this

tool, and they appealed to AI developers to stop these experiments or it could extinguish humanity.

Besides

that, each time new

technologies

are been created, more and more individuals will not study scientifically.

According to

my studies about

this

topic, the conclusion is that a large part of society isn`t ready and research only to use evolutionary tools like AI.

To conclude

, like everything,

science

never ever ceases to be significant for humanity, and the latest generation misses when kids and adults invested time to learn about everything through books in the library. Consciously, parents, authorities, and entrepreneurs must take care of all of society, each one in their response.

Submitted by murilo.siqueira2012 on Thu Apr 06 2023

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