Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter explain the problem explain how it is causing you provide an appropriate solution Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr .........,

Dear Mr Kumar, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that your garbage bins kept between our houses are creating a lot of problems and

further

attracting wild

animals

. My name is Vikas Garg and I am your neighbour next door. The garbage bins that you leave outside contain food which attracts wild

animals

from the surrounding areas. Because these

animals

have a strong sense of smell , particularly racoons are coming regularly to my entry door and making a mess of that garbage.

This

is not only an issue of hygiene but

also

a safety issue for my family. I would recommend you either keep these dirt boxes in the garage or replace it with ones having tight lids. Most of us in

this

area keep these boxes inside the garage which keeps the locality safe from wild

animals

. If the action is not taken soon, the locality will get unsafe for everyone. I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Vikas Garg

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