The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
the graph
show
us the Change the verb form
shows
different
in the rate of new-born in Replace the word
difference
China
and Change the capitalization
America
america
from 1920 to 2000
Change the capitalization
America
Overall
,america
are Change the capitalization
America
Americans
showed
to Wrong verb form
shown
had
the rates dominated all the time Wrong verb form
have
while
China
had the highest birth rates in the whole graph at one point
Looking in
the first 30 Change preposition
at
years
, it can be seen that both countries had
fluctuated a bit and experienced a downfall and a climax during Unnecessary verb
apply
this
period.In addition
, America
's birth rates
Fix the agreement mistake
rate
had
dropped to 5% in 1945 but quickly recovered to 15% within 5 Unnecessary verb
apply
years
.Moreover
,China
had its proportion fall to 5% from 1940 to 1945 and skyrocket to 20% in 1950, as twice as much as from the beginning
However
, from that moment to the end of the graph, 2 nations have shown an opposite side from the first 30 years
when the proportion fell significantly.While
America
witnessed a slight fall through the years
and reached 7% in 2000.China
, on the other hand
, falls significantly to 2 % in the 50 year
period.Add a hyphen
50-year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, america, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 4 times.
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