The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries.

The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries.
The table graph gives information about
food
consumption
in four different countries.
Wheat
,
maize
and
rice
are the three basic
food
for
consumption
.
Overall
, the
people
in Egypt had the highest
consumption
of basic
food
with the exception of
rice
. Cambodia, Egypt and Mexico had great numbers of calorie
consumption
in
Maize
.
However
, Poland had no consumers of
this
food
. In detail,
rice
is the most consumed
food
of Cambodian
people
having 1445
calories
a
day
per individual
while
Egyptian nationals eat 501
calories
of
rice
a
day
. The dwellers of Mexico and Poland showed little interest in eating
rice
as their daily calorie intake is at 57 and 19, respectively.
However
, a different trend is seen for
wheat
as it is the least consumed
food
of
people
in Cambodia at 18
calories
a
day
as compared with their
consumption
of
rice
. A huge difference in figures as well for Mexico at 275
calories
a
day
. Residents in Egypt had the greatest calorie intake for
wheat
among other countries at 1095
calories
per
day
for each individual. Followed closely by
people
in Poland consuming 865
calories
of
wheat
each
day
.
Furthermore
, the preferences of each country vary again in regard to their caloric
consumption
. Mexican nationalities is the highest consumer of
Maize
having 1083
calories
a
day
per person.
That is
more than half of the Egyptian
people
consume 578 daily
calories
each individual. Cambodia consumes
maize
far more little at 103
calories
while
Polanies do not eat
maize
at all.
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