the chart below shows the aid form six developed countries to devloping countries from 2008-2009
The chart shows
aid
in $ Add the particle
to aid
billion
from the US, Germany, the UK, Japan, the Netherland
and Sweden from 2008 to 2009. In general, the US always contributed the highest Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
ampount
of aid among other countries.
It can be clearly seen that Correct your spelling
amount
he
US spend more than 20 Correct your spelling
the
billion
in 2008. However
, the number drop
to nearly 20 Wrong verb form
dropped
billion
in the following year. In 2010, the aid paid by the US shows a significant rise of amount
to almost 25 Add an article
the amount
an amount
billion
. The least amount paid is from the Netherlands with less than 8 billion
in 2008.
Germany, the UK and Japan spend quite
similar amount in 2008, which is not more than 15 Change the article
quite a
a quite
billion
. In contrast
, Sweden follow the footsteps of the Netherlands where they only contributed less than 10 billion
in 2008.Submitted by alifahrc on
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