you recently took an IELTS test and there some problems that you believe affected your score. write a letter to the British council or IDP. in your letter explain what happened say if other candidates were affected and explain what you would like the BC/IDP to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. My name is Rustamova Laylo and I was your candidate in your

last

exam.I am writing

this

letter in order to complain about problems which I faced at the British Council examination centre. I took my exam

last

Sunday on 9th of April.

However

, there was a lot of disruption and

also

that can be caused me of losing my score.

Moreover

, the temperature was really high.

That is

to say, students were sweating and they were getting nervous from

this

situation.

In addition

, in the reading section, the examiners of IELTS were talking loudly with each other

as well as

laughing. That was a major reason to affect my score.

On the other hand

, other test takers were affected because of these issues. In the end, everybody would be concerned about that situation. Now I am asking you to pay attention to my problem.I hope you will resolve the matter to our satisfaction. Yours faithfully, Rustamova Laylo

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

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Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 9.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

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you recently took an IELTS test and there some problems that you believe affected your score. write a letter to the British council or IDP. in your letter explain what happened say if other candidates were affected and explain what you would like the BC/IDP to do.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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