The chart gives information about how commuters travelled to work in one city in New Zealand.

The chart gives information about how commuters travelled to work in one city in New Zealand.
The bar chart compares different ways of travelling to work among certain citizens in New Zealand in 1996 and 2006.
Overall
, it can be observed that using private
car
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and
truck
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trucks
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by far were the most popular
ways
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to reach
the
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work.
However
, the least popular form of
transport
in one city in New Zealand were
train
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,
motorcycle
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motorcycles
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and others. In 1996, the number of employed people using private car or truck was exactly 50%,
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figure fell dramatically and the second
popular
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transport
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company vehicle and working at home, about 10% for each one.
Although
, at the same time the least often used
transport
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transports
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were motorcycle and other forms, about 1% and 2% respectively. In 2006, the highest percentage of working people using private
transport
was about 37%. The second most used
transport
at
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the same year was a company vehicle, about 15%.
However
, the least popular among
employess
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employees
employers
were train, motorcycle and other
transport
, about 3%, 1% and 2% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words transport with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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