Your local council has advertised for volunteers to teach on a basic English programme for refugees. You would like to do some work for this programme in your free time. Write a letter to the programme coordinator. In your letter • explain why you would like to do unpaid work on this programme • describe why you are a suitable candidate • say when you are available to teach.

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Dear Sir, I am Harvey, leaving at flat 1, 539, Forest Road, Canterbury 2036. I am writing to you with regard to the advertisement in "The Times" for a volunteer English teacher. First of all, I am a student at Hallam University. I saw an advertisement on 27 march about volunteering work and I am interested to teach English program to refugees because

this

not only boosts my CV but

also

improves my confidence level. Moving on, I found myself a suitable person to teach

according to

the advertisement because I

also

attend two seminars

last

year and have great knowledge of basic concepts. I am pursuing Masters in English.

Finally

, I would really appreciate you if you give me a chance to participate in that work.

Moreover

, from June - August I am on holiday. I want to utilise

this

time in volunteering work. Please let me know if you require any

further

information. My email ID is [email protected] I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Harvey

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