The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar graph illustrates the percentage of males and females working as
teachers
in different educational institutions in the UK in the year 2010.
The highest proportion of women practising as teachers
were in nursery and primary school settings, whilst the lowest was in University. Meanwhile, the largest ratio of men worked as teachers
in universities, whereas
the least was in nurseries.
In the year 2010 in the UK approximately 90 per cent of female teachers
choose to practice in nursery/pre-school settings, meanwhile
the number of male Add a comma
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teachers
was the lowest in this
setting.
Meanwhile, the lowest percentage of females was found to be working in university settings (30%) in 2010, whereas
the highest proportion of male (95%) teachers
choose to work at university. Furthermore
, in college
there was an equal proportion of 50 per cent.Add a comma
,college
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