The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table below shows the changes in the
number
of people who travelled internationally (Africa, America, Asia and the Pacific, Europe and the Middle East) in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.
Overall
, the total number
of travellers increased significantly between these years. Also
, their most visited continent is Europe, and the Middle East was the least visited one.
The number
of visitors to Africa rose slightly from 18.2 million
to 28.7 between 1990 and 2005. As for travellers to America, the count grew by over a half from 1990 to 1995 and fluctuated to 118.2 million
and 113.2 million
respectively in 2000 and 2005.
The number
of people who visited Asia and the pacific showed constant growth of approximately 20 million
over the years. For Europe, the count of travellers increased dramatically between 1990 and 1995 from 280.2 million
to 390.3 million
. Although
, in 2000 and 2005 the count increased slightly to 393.2 million
and 400.2 million
respectively. In addition
, the number
of people visiting to
the Middle East remained steady during the period.Remove the preposition
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