You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend’s belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited. In your letter include: - Why you are writing - What you’ve been doing since you last spoke together - Apologize for still having the items and ask how you can return them

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Dear Anju, I hope you and your family are doing well. It's been quite a time since we

last

meet.

Moreover

, as you know few of the things from your

last

visit are still here.

Furthermore

, I would like to apologize for it, as you are aware I am very much busy with my office work and home.

Firstly

, I have to do all the daily chores and

then

leave for work because my mother is ill.

Secondly

, I was recently promoted to senior manager so, I was busy getting things done.

Additionally

, about your belongings, I am happy to inform you that I will be visiting you next summer and will bring all your items

along with

you. I believe you won't be angry with me

this

time as will be spending a month with you. Take care of your family and yourself. Yours loving, Ranjan

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