Pollution is an increasing at an alarming rate. Give a reason and solution.
One of the alarming problems is
pollution
which is increasing significantly. The 2 main reasons for this
trend are deforestation
and overconsumption of resources. This
essay will discuss the causes and possible solutions for given
problem.
Add an article
a given
the given
Firstly
, deforestation
is damaging natural habitat
and the environment. For illustration, Fix the agreement mistake
habitats
deforestation
by humans lead
to Change the verb form
leads
decrease
Correct article usage
a decrease
the
Change preposition
in the
number
of the
canary. These Correct article usage
apply
trophical
birds are normally living only a certain climate Correct your spelling
tropical
condition
. Owing to Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
mankind
activities, these birds are Change noun form
mankind's
loosing
their homes and must Replace the word
losing
to
migrate to other climate conditions. Unfortunately, these species can not Fix the infinitive
apply
adaptated
easily Correct your spelling
adapted
for
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to
the
environmental changes. Correct article usage
apply
Secondly
, increased logging results in decreased
Add an article
a decreased
the decreased
number
of rainforests. These special trees are remarkable oxygen suppliers to Correct article usage
the earth
earth
atmosphereChange noun form
earth's
,
and Remove the comma
apply
asistants
Correct your spelling
assistants
assistance
for
reducing the carbon footprint of humans which is leading Change preposition
in
air
Change preposition
to air
pollution
. For instance
, one oak tree reduces %50 of nearly 10 people's carbon footprints in a year. If the government considers to stop
Change the verb form
stopping
deforestation
in a long term, these forests can help to solve air pollution
. Reducing the number
of the
logging camps in forests can be a solution Correct article usage
apply
for
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to
deforestation
.
Finally
, over consumption
of raw materials Correct your spelling
overconsumption
are
remarkably increasing harmful by-products. These wastes are dangerous to oceans and the environment. Polluted oceans are a popular problem Correct subject-verb agreement
is
among
society. 10 years ago, people could easily Change preposition
in
ate
Change the verb form
eat
fishes
in a restaurant, but Fix the agreement mistake
fish
the
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apply
pollution
and overfishing have plunged the number
of fishes
perplexedly. A solution for reducing ocean Fix the agreement mistake
fish
pollution
would be the restriction of plastic usage among
supermarkets. Change preposition
in
Moreover
, not only the government but also
supermarkets should be
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apply
collabrate
to solve Correct your spelling
collaborate
collaborative
this
issue.
In conclusion, pollution
is highly
important issue and increasing at an Add an article
a highly
alarm
rate. Change the verb form
alarming
Deforestation
and overconsumption of resources are nourishing the problem. Reducing logging camps and plastic usage may help to tackle with
Change preposition
apply
pollution
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