The use of smartphones is decreasing our collective intelligence because we are reliant on the technology not on our own minds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, It's getting generous to use electronic

devices

for personal life. Despite the convenience of using high-edge technology, there are pros and cons to using electronic

devices

in daily routines. Since the IT technique has developed steadily, most people are exposed to using electronic

devices

at workplaces, schools, and extra.

For

this

reason, using a smartphone or tablet or computer is getting universal in the current era. Electronic

devices

used in modern life are quite infiltrated worldwide. You can easily imagine one person waking up, checking the time using

smartphone

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,

preparing

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to go to work or school by using google Maps to go direct

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where they want to go. After ,that

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person uses electronic

devices

-computer, iPad,

Tablet

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tablets

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,

smartphone

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, etc for their work or study.

After

this

, they go the home and use electronic

devices

to watch Netflix or Disney plus for enjoyment. For a whole of

these daily routine

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, you can acknowledge that even though we generally think of ourselves we control what we are doing is not true. Basically without electronic

devices

, we cannot do anything. We already rely on electronic

devices

more than we expected. I strongly agree that

human

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humans

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lean on electronic

devices

more than in any other century. So there is a reason why we intentionally try to use electronic

devices

less than what we expect.