The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the
percentage
of people
who have part-time jobs in the countries that make up the United Kingdom, both in 1980 and in
2010. Change preposition
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generally been a small increase in part-time Add the auxiliary verb
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workers
from 1980 to 2010, except in Northern Ireland. The graph also
shows that England and Wales have far more part-time workers
than Northern Ireland and Scotland.
In 1980, 25% of people
in England worked part time
. The only country with a greater Add a hyphen
part-time
percentage
of part-time workers
was Wales, with around 33% working part time
. Both countries saw an increase in the Add a hyphen
part-time
percentage
of people
working part time
in 2010. In England, the Add a hyphen
part-time
percentage
rose to over 30% and in Wales percentage
rose to just over 35%.
Scotland had the smallest Correct article usage
the percentage
percentage
of part-time workers
in 1980, with just over ten per cent. However
, this
rose to almost 20% in 2010 which is a large increase. Lastly
, Northern Ireland was the only country which had a decreasing percentage
of part-time workers
. In 1980, it had around 15% of people
in part-time work. This
decreased by a couple of per cent in 2010.Submitted by samiahammadi77 on
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