The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum duringthe year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show theresult of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visitduring the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table compares the figures for
people
who visited Ashdown
Museum
throughout the years before and after its refurbishment and two pie charts illustrate visitors
' responses to surveys concerning their satisfaction.
Overall
, it is apparent that after Ashdown
Museum
was renovated, more visitors
travelled to this
place and the research about people
's satisfaction revealed that fewer citizens were disgruntled with this
museum
.
Looking at the table first,
there were 74000 visitors
who went to Ashdown
Museum
before the refurbishment. However
, an obvious increment can be seen after the renovation, with the number increasing to 92000.
In terms of visitors
' positive feedback after visiting, the proportion of people
who were rather satisfied with Ashdown
Museum
grew significantly, from 15% to 35%. Similarly
, the percentage of people
who were fairly pleased with their visiting experience rose by 10%, which predominated among five groups of people
in the year after restoration.
More striking is that approximately 40% of people
were disgruntled with the museum
before restoration, but decreased dramatically after refurbishment, falling to 15%. The proportion of extremely discontented visitors
also
saw a slight decline from 10% to 5%. Interestingly, the figure for people
with no response to the survey turned out to be the same in two years, at 5%.Submitted by Evalynn on
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