The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010.

A glance at the two pie graphs provided reveals the percentage of Canadian selling on the internet market in terms of four parts in 2005 and 2010.

Overall

it is clear that

online buying behaviours had been reshaped, and people purchased different kinds of things in 2019 and 2020.

Also

, xx and xx experienced an upward trend

while

clothing and xx showed an opposite direction. In the year of 2019, the rate of clothing was by far the highest, at 38%. Followed by the figure for home and kitchen was over a quarter, at 29%. The other two sectors()were both lower than 20%.

However

, in 2020, dramatic growth showed in the electronic sector, which held the largest part of these categories, increasing to 45%, compared to the date of 2009, almost rising by 20%. Meanwhile, the number of clothing sales, and home and kitchen suffered a significant decrease, to only 22% and xx% respectively.

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