Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion
Nowadays, some part of the population finds joy in trying new activities or different
food
. On the other hand
, other people
feel comfortable doing things
they know from before. This
essay will discuss why people
have such
a different points
of view about doing the same Correct the article-noun agreement
a different point
different points
things
or completely differently.
To begin
with, some people
think they will gain more experience because they are trying unusual things
. The main reason for that,
is visiting new places or trying new Remove the comma
apply
food
increases your knowledge about different cultures or history. For example
, if you are on holiday to new places like Italy and you are visiting Rome maybe you will discover new things
about Coliseum you did not know before. In this
,case you can learn something new and as well find joy while
you are learning.
On the other side, some people
like to have a sense of stability in their life and this
can be related to only experiencing things
they know they like. Therefore
, people
who rely on stability tend to not try new things
because they like more familiar activities or food
. For example
, Oxford university analysts different kinds of personalities and shows people
who tend to be more stable are less open to experiencing new activities or food
. For this
people
's personality influences the way they want to experience life with new things
or thing
they know from before.
In conclusion, some Fix the agreement mistake
things
people
like to try a new experiences
in their life. Correct the article-noun agreement
new experiences
a new experience
However
, other people
like more familiar things
. In my opinion, I think I like more trying new things
because of the experience and new knowledge. On the other hand
, we see why some people
are not so open to experiencing new things
mainly because of their personality which chooses to have more stability.Submitted by usoncata on
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