The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas

The table shows information about a material called concrete canvas and how to make a storage
area
with it. The
process
go
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through 8 different
stages
, each has its own methods to complete it perfectly.
Further
,
this
report will discuss the approach in
details
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detail
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from the
begin
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until the end.
To begin
with, concrete
canves
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canvas
a
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method used to build storage
area
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. The report is will take you
step
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to step
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by
step
and give you more information on the
process
how it started and how it should be ended.
According to
the data, there are 8
stages
each stage has its own features and methods. The first
step
in making it,
manufacturing
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is manufacturing
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which includes several
stages
such
as fibrous top surface, dry concrete, and waterproof layer.
After
this
,
delivering
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it to the
area
,
then
unwrapping.
This
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is the
stages
made in factor before arriving
to
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the place of
building
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the building
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.
In addition
,
fourth
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the fourth
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step
is
sppreading
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spreading
on the ground when you need a truck, rope,
pegs
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and pegs
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and
choose
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choosing
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the
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a
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place within 10 meters.
Following
this
, the builder needs an
airpump
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air pump
with
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to
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make that the door
closed
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,
then
start pumping air to make the place
in
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at
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good
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a good
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temperature. To
countinue
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continue
the
process
,
three
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the three
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last
stages
go through watering,
setteing
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setting
and
finally
storing
uderground
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underground
by 8 meters to keep the
whether
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weather
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good
as
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apply
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enough.
This
process
to help
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helps
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society if they need to build a storage
area
in their areas.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, process, stages, step with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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