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The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas

The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas
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The table shows information about a material called concrete canvas and how to make a storage
area
 with it. The process
go
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 through 8 different
stages
, each has its own methods to complete it perfectly.
Further
,
this
 report will discuss the approach in
details
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detail
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 from the
begin
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 until the end.
To begin
 with, concrete
canves
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canvas
a
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are a
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method used to build storage
area
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areas
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. The first step in making it,
manufacturing
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is manufacturing
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 which includes several
stages
such
 as fibrous top surface, dry concrete, and waterproof layer.
After
this
,
delivering
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deliver
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 it to the
area
,
then
 unwrapping.
This
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These
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 is the
stages
 made in factor before arriving
to
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at
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 the place of
building
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the building
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.
In addition
,
fourth
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the fourth
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 step is
sppreading
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spreading
 on the ground when you need a truck, rope,
pegs
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and pegs
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 and
choose
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choosing
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the
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a
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 place within 10 meters.
Following
this
, the builder needs an air pump to make that the door is closed,
then
 start pumping air to make the place
in
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at
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good
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a good
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 temperature. To continue the process,
three
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the three
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last
stages
 go through watering,
setteing
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setting
 and
finally
 storing underground by 8 meters to keep the
whether
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weather
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 good as enough.
To sum up
,
this
 process
to help
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helps
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 society if they need to build a storage
area
 in their areas.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, stages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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