You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with your hotel room. Write to the hotel manager. In your letter… - Tell the manager about the problems you had - Explain to them how you feel about what happened - Let them know what actions you would like them to take. Write no less than 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresses Start your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir, I hope you had a good weekend. I am a new customer checking in to the hotel Saturday

night

Overall

, I have good experiences in

this

hotel when I have business trips in

this

city. I quite like the outlay of the rooms, it is quite

cozy

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cosy

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However

, I found the faucet in the washroom is

loosen

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loose

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. Water is leaking from the faucet and I cannot

tight

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tighten

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it as possible as I can. The sounds of water dripping cause me crazy especially at

night

. It cause me insomnia, I could not complete my assignments well during the day

due to

bad sleeping. I have already

call

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the receptionist the first

night

when I checked in

the

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at the

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hotel. The receptionist, Susan, has promised me that she will call somebody

come

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to come

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to fix

during

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it during

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the weekend.

However

, the faucet is still leaking when I came back from my conference today. Since today is Monday, I hope you can ask a repairman and make it

fix

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by Tuesday.

Otherwise

, I cannot sleep well during the

night

. Or if there is any vacant room,

then

I can switch. There was no available room during the weekend. Thank you for your help. Best regards, Kathy

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