There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making temperature higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperature rising?
Although
industrial production
of materials
are
developing civilization efficiently, there Change the verb form
is
is
some consequences of Change the verb form
are
such
a massive amount of production
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products
such
as climate change and global warming which results in an increased temprature
over time. Correct your spelling
temperature
This
essay will discuss the main causes of temperature rising through the
man-made Correct article usage
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materials
.
It is certain that,
electronic devices, which are helping people's daily life, need Remove the comma
apply
to
lots of raw Change preposition
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materials
for their developing and serial production
states which leads to depletion
of sources like Correct article usage
the depletion
woods
, Fix the agreement mistake
wood
water
and different metals. These actions also
result in deforestation in a short term. Deforestation and depletion of water
sources are both directly and indirectly related to increased carbon
footprint and eventually increase in temperature. One of the most important industrial production
material
is plastic which is resistant to Fix the agreement mistake
materials
biodegeneration
in Correct your spelling
degeneration
a
Correct article usage
the
longterm
. Because of the chemical structure of Correct your spelling
long term
the
plastic, it has to Correct article usage
apply
recycled
with technological processes. Add a missing verb
be recycled
This
unsuccessful degeneration affects water
sources and natural habitat
badly.
Another issue is Fix the agreement mistake
habitats
overconsumption
of raw Add an article
the overconsumption
materials
lead to high
level of Add an article
a high
the high
carbon based
gases like Add a hyphen
carbon-based
a
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carbon
dioxide. High level
of Fix the agreement mistake
levels
carbon
dioxide in the atmosphere also
related to global warming. Processed foods Add a missing verb
are also
such
as salami, pastrami or fast foods are great examples for
overconsumption of Change preposition
of
the
raw Correct article usage
apply
materials
. This
action has a poor impact on environment
and human health.
In conclusion, industrial products (Add an article
the environment
such
as electronic devices and processed foods) and overconsumption of raw materials
such
as wood, water
and metals result in an
increased temperature and deforestation which is directly related to global warming.Correct article usage
apply
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