You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. in your letter -Explain why you want to work in company's head office for six months -Say how your work could be done while you are away - Ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Mr Robert, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to request you about my transfer to our head office in Sydney for six months. I am working in

this

company for the

last

8 years and I am eager to update and develop my technical skill in

PHP

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field for our new international project, which is going to start in 2024. PHP training courses will start in Sydney in May 2023. During the six months that I am aboard, my professional colleague, Maritt Anderson is able to support me and some of my current responsibilities can be done by her.

In addition

, I am able to participate in important monthly meetings which are held online and weekly reports could be prepared by me. I was wondering if you could support me in transferring to Sydney,

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I believe

this

training can be beneficial for the company in the near future. Best Regards, Shahrzad Keshavarzi PHP Developer Manager

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