The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California

and the rest of the world.
The above pie chart illustrates the percentage of use of
water
for residential, industrial, and agricultural purposes in
San
Diego
,
California
, and worldwide.
Overall
,In
San
Diego
, a major portion of
water
is consumed for residential purposes
while
agricultural usage is the biggest contributor to
water
consumption all over the world.Industrial usage is the same in both
San
Diego
as well as
worldwide. The residential use of
water
is much more in
San
Diego
about 60% as compared to less utilization in
California
and the rest of the world about 39% and 8% respectively. The industries consume
water
more in
California
about 33% which is 10% more excessive than used in
San
Diego
and worldwide about 23 %. Agricultural use of
water
covers the majority of consumption about 69% in the world and 17% and 28 % in
San
Diego
and
California
respectively.
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